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Your practice answer is short of 250 words, so you repeat a point and reach for "moreover." It feels padded, yet your paragraphs still seem underdeveloped. Give it four jobs: two concise sentences introducing your position, one body paragraph for each of two focused points, then a one-sentence conclusion. The word count comes from developing two focused points, not adding ideas or linkers. In your practice answer, each body paragraph needs one point, an explanation, and a relevant example. A gerund is an "-ing" verb form used as a noun; use one in your explanation, then add a clause showing why it matters. For paragraph two, choose a different point and explain it clearly, with its own example. Vary key words naturally; don't force synonyms. Use linkers only when they clarify a connection. Keep four paragraphs in your practice answer. Reach the minimum by developing ideas, not padding.